The letter i chose as an example was a congratulation's letter. I think the letter is perfect, it is to the point very clear and does not use language that the common person can not understand. It is genuine from the company to the person. The headings and closure are correct. If i were to receive a letter such as this one i would find no mistakes. The business that wrote this letter comes off very professional and great to work with.
Thursday, September 15, 2011
Businesses that are to formal with their websites are not efficient. People do not want to have to think about what is on the website they want to read it and get what is being said right away. Businesses should use things that are more appealing to the common person and that will catch their eye right away. Businesses are hurting themselves by being formal. It is good to be formal in certain situations but while trying to appeal to their clients they should use simple and to the point websites.